scene 1
Shot 1 - Fix Fist smash. Only smash once?
Shot 2 – Sal climbs into shot. Focus pull to him climbing Balcony.
NEW SCENE* - Now SC2
Shot 1 – 1 Cloud photo CP
Shot 2 – 2/3 Cloud photos MID
Shot 3 – Mid shot, Avery walks past close to camera
SCENE 2 – Now SC3
Shot 1 – Unchanged
Shot 2 – Tighten animation. Sleave is moving.
Shot 3 – Unchanged
Shot 4 – Add headshake? More aggression/frustration
Shot 5* - Tighter version on SH2. Avery throws brush at Canvas
Shot 6* - Paintbrush rolls outside. Avery’s legs in shot, walks OFS, focus shift to Sal, looking at paintbrush
Shot 7 – Sal places brush on desk, next to lamp. Two hands
Shot 8 – Avery throws canvas down chimney
Shot 9 – Clouds erupt into sky
SCENE 3 – Now SC4
Shot 1 – Tight shot, chimney, Clouds flow into sky
Shot 2 – Clouds form, Raindrops emerge
Shot 3 – Avery watches sky. Blinks
Shot 4 – Watches clouds drift by. Becomes angry.
Shot 5 – Turns back. Takes photo with external flash in other hand
Shot 6* – Fades in from white out, photo prints, corresponding noise
SCENE 4 NEW* - Now SC5
Shot 1 – Avery looks at photo. Begins to anger
Shot 2 – Cut to Avery flicking switch to sad face*
SCENE 5 – Now SC6
Shot 1 – Clouds get sucked out of sky. Rain drops fall.
Shot 2 – Clouds reversing down chimney.
SCENE 6 – Now SC7
Shot 1 – Avery walks past clouds flowing back down chimney
Shot 2 – Avery hangs picture. Pause and settle for longer
Shot 3 – Avery kicks off ladder
Shot 4 – Avery fly’s past
Shot 5 – Avery goes out of shot and back. Longer pause at photo.
Shot 6* - Reaction shot: Avery face Sighs
Shot 7 – Avery slumps into chair, see brush next to lamp
Shot 8 – Same as SC2SH7, Focus pull to Avery in BG. Confused.
SCENE 7 – Now SC8
Shot 1 – Arms and picture
Shot 2 – Sal looks at old photo, then sighs
SCENE 9
Lightning not completely black. Just faded then lighting strikes and lights, still leaving dark patches but over exposing what it touches. Strobe effect?
Shot 1 – Bed, sleeping
Shot 2 – Sal into shot, holding picture
Shot 3 – Avery Awake
Shot 4 – Avery walks past beam. Sal from behind beam
Shot 5 – Sal follows after, leaving wet foot prints
Shot 6 – Low angle Avery looking around
Shot 7 – Avery POV, Sal into shot
Shot 8 – Avery reaction, Sal in corner
Shot 9 – Sal falls back down into shot (same as SC9SH7)
Shot 10 – Sal runs from shot, paint pots drop. Avery runs past
Shot 11 * - (Old SC4SH2) Sal runs past, Avery chase
Shot 12 – Sal runs along bed end. Leaves paint footprints
Shot 13 – Sal runs across desk, Avery stumbles on desk tyring to catch Sal
Shot 14 – (Old SC6SH3) Sal stands on Chimney rail, looks back
Shot 15 – Avery yells out for him to wait
Shot 16 - (Old SC6SH3, adjust from shot14) Sal swings arms back ready to jump
Shot 17 – Avery grabs picture
Shot 18 – Sal falls down chimney and photos catches wind and floats down
Shot 19 - (Old SC6SH3, adjust from shot16) Avery watches the photo catch wind and float down
Shot 20* – Top view, down chimney, photo slowly falls down, fading into darkness. Pause at end then slight glint of light.
Shot 21 – Avery stands and watches clouds spew from chimney
SCENE 10
Shot 1 – Avery stands on balcony looking at sky
Shot 2 – CU of Avery face. Amazed
Shot 3 – Sal falls into shot photo floats down after him
Shot 4 – Avery bends down for photo, returns holding it. Sal joins him at the railing. Avery points to him self and Sal nods
Shot 5 – Avery is holding photo up. Drops to reveal sky same as image.
SCENE 11
Shot 1 – Avery places old image into frame. Kicks ladder out of shot.
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