Shot List * Updated

Last night at around 11pm after effects died in a hole. So I went around to Seamus's and fixed it up. That took about 25 minutes. But then at around 4am after a scotch and coke I emerged with a entirely different shot list and slight alter (again) story.

It is as follows:

scene 1

Shot 1 - Fix Fist smash. Only smash once?

Shot 2 – Sal climbs into shot. Focus pull to him climbing Balcony.

NEW SCENE* - Now SC2

Shot 1 – 1 Cloud photo CP

Shot 2 – 2/3 Cloud photos MID

Shot 3 – Mid shot, Avery walks past close to camera

SCENE 2 – Now SC3

Shot 1 – Unchanged

Shot 2 – Tighten animation. Sleave is moving.

Shot 3 – Unchanged

Shot 4 – Add headshake? More aggression/frustration

Shot 5* - Tighter version on SH2. Avery throws brush at Canvas

Shot 6* - Paintbrush rolls outside. Avery’s legs in shot, walks OFS, focus shift to Sal, looking at paintbrush

Shot 7 – Sal places brush on desk, next to lamp. Two hands

Shot 8 – Avery throws canvas down chimney

Shot 9 – Clouds erupt into sky

SCENE 3 – Now SC4

Shot 1 – Tight shot, chimney, Clouds flow into sky

Shot 2 – Clouds form, Raindrops emerge

Shot 3 – Avery watches sky. Blinks

Shot 4 – Watches clouds drift by. Becomes angry.

Shot 5 – Turns back. Takes photo with external flash in other hand

Shot 6* – Fades in from white out, photo prints, corresponding noise

SCENE 4 NEW* - Now SC5

Shot 1 – Avery looks at photo. Begins to anger

Shot 2 – Cut to Avery flicking switch to sad face*

SCENE 5 – Now SC6

Shot 1 – Clouds get sucked out of sky. Rain drops fall.

Shot 2 – Clouds reversing down chimney.

SCENE 6 – Now SC7

Shot 1 – Avery walks past clouds flowing back down chimney

Shot 2 – Avery hangs picture. Pause and settle for longer

Shot 3 – Avery kicks off ladder

Shot 4 – Avery fly’s past

Shot 5 – Avery goes out of shot and back. Longer pause at photo.

Shot 6* - Reaction shot: Avery face Sighs

Shot 7 – Avery slumps into chair, see brush next to lamp

Shot 8 – Same as SC2SH7, Focus pull to Avery in BG. Confused.

SCENE 7 – Now SC8

Shot 1 – Arms and picture

Shot 2 – Sal looks at old photo, then sighs

SCENE 9

Lightning not completely black. Just faded then lighting strikes and lights, still leaving dark patches but over exposing what it touches. Strobe effect?

Shot 1 – Bed, sleeping

Shot 2 – Sal into shot, holding picture

Shot 3 – Avery Awake

Shot 4 – Avery walks past beam. Sal from behind beam

Shot 5 – Sal follows after, leaving wet foot prints

Shot 6 – Low angle Avery looking around

Shot 7 – Avery POV, Sal into shot

Shot 8 – Avery reaction, Sal in corner

Shot 9 – Sal falls back down into shot (same as SC9SH7)

Shot 10 – Sal runs from shot, paint pots drop. Avery runs past

Shot 11 * - (Old SC4SH2) Sal runs past, Avery chase

Shot 12 – Sal runs along bed end. Leaves paint footprints

Shot 13 – Sal runs across desk, Avery stumbles on desk tyring to catch Sal

Shot 14 – (Old SC6SH3) Sal stands on Chimney rail, looks back

Shot 15 – Avery yells out for him to wait

Shot 16 - (Old SC6SH3, adjust from shot14) Sal swings arms back ready to jump

Shot 17 – Avery grabs picture

Shot 18 – Sal falls down chimney and photos catches wind and floats down

Shot 19 - (Old SC6SH3, adjust from shot16) Avery watches the photo catch wind and float down

Shot 20* – Top view, down chimney, photo slowly falls down, fading into darkness. Pause at end then slight glint of light.

Shot 21 – Avery stands and watches clouds spew from chimney

SCENE 10

Shot 1 – Avery stands on balcony looking at sky

Shot 2 – CU of Avery face. Amazed

Shot 3 – Sal falls into shot photo floats down after him

Shot 4 – Avery bends down for photo, returns holding it. Sal joins him at the railing. Avery points to him self and Sal nods

Shot 5 – Avery is holding photo up. Drops to reveal sky same as image.

SCENE 11

Shot 1 – Avery places old image into frame. Kicks ladder out of shot.

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